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An example of copy-editing the text for a brochure promoting Thai tourism.

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Encounter Thailand like never before!
INSIGHT SIAM TOURS offers you a unique connection with communities: their cultures, cuisines and crafts.

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Brochure
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OUR THAILAND ‘ENCOUNTERS’ TOUR:
CULTURES, CUISINE, COUNTRYSIDE, COMMUNITIES AND CRAFTS

Been to Thailand Before?
If yes, then come again – for the FIRST time!

INSIGHT SIAM

We present a Thai tour package like no other, as we shepherd you beyond the glossy brochures and well-worn tourist path to reveal the Thailand beyond… And yes, our Thai tours are not for everybody, but rather for the more descending traveller who wants to develop a deeper appreciation of the country and its culture – and as you’ll discover, its one that’s far richer and more rewarding than you ever imagined.  Our friendly and professional guides, all fluent in English, will mobilise their extensive knowledge of Thailand and lead you to those critical vantage points to see and experience what others overlook.

GO INSIGHT: ONCE IN A LIFETIME EXPERIENCE

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​Visit a Thai fine arts and dance college, see the students perform and have a go yourself.

The first Australian connection: visit the Australian Museum and ‘Hellfire Pass’ at Kanchanaburi.

Visit an off-the-beaten-track authentic local market.

Attend a presentation on Buddhism and meditation. Visit a ‘little monks’ school and orphanage for disadvantaged northern children.

Visit a countryside mindfulness and meditation retreat.

Experienced a rice farm home-stay: get muddy feet and plant away!

Visit an authentic and functioning ethnic village at Phang Nga.

Take an excursion into Thailand’s Chinese home base: Charoen Nakkorn and Thonburi.

Visit some communities of the ‘khlong’ (canals) in a long-tail boat.

See first-hand a craft and weaving community. 

See weaving and timber crafts firsthand. 

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Encounter Thailand like never before!

INSIGHT SIAM TOURS offers you a unique connection with communities: their cultures, cuisines and crafts.

INSIGHT SIAM

Our very name ‘INSIGHT SIAM’, carries our promise to you of experiences far richer than you ever imagined, tailored to give you memorable insights into our Kingdom.

​Let our friendly and professional guides expertly lead you to this deeper appreciation by showing you the essence of our country and its people: the aspects often overlooked, the places off the beaten track.  Through their fluent English and vast knowledge, they’ll guide you to greater insight into Siam.

YOUR ONCE-IN-A-LIFETIME EXPERIENCE AWAITS!

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​Get inspired by Fine Arts and music. Then get on your feet and dance to the rhythm at a Thai college for the Arts.

Explore the Australian and Thai linked heritage at ‘Hellfire Pass’ in Kanchanaburi.

Treasure-hunt at an off-the-beaten-track authentic market.

Take a closer look at Buddhism and meet the ‘little monks’ at their school and residence for disadvantaged children.

​Absorb our rural tranquillity at a meditation and mindfulness retreat.

Be a farmer for a day.  A rice farm homestay awaits you!

Visit an authentic, functioning ethnic village, and connect with a traditional lifestyle at Phang Nga.

Take an excursion into Thailand’s Chinese heartland: Charoen Nakkorn and Thonburi.

Visit ‘Khlong’ communities in a long-tail boat on the backwater canals of Bangkok.

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Watch how homespun yarn is woven into exquisite cloth, and timber transformed into sculpture.

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